#Pratiyogita Kavita by Jaya Singh

हाहाकार चहुँ ओर है , मचा हुआ है क्रंदन ।
अस्मत के मोल का , आज हो रहा है हनन। # 1
राम और रावण के मध्य , सदा रही है अनबन ।
कौन सुने पीर सिया की ,उसका घुटन भरा रुदन। # 2
चपल वाचाल उपद्रवी , छितराये हुए हैं सघन ।
लोलुपता से कुचल रहे जो, हर सीते का शुद्ध स्पंदन। # 3
कैसे पहचाने भीड़ में , कौन राम है कौन रावन।
दूषित कर रहें जो निरंतर, कंचन समान बदन। # 4
स्वछंदता हावी सब पर है ,अनाधीनता का है चलन।
अति लोभ बन गया , हर एक जीवन का साधन। # 5
तुच्छ अवशेष सरीखे हैं अब, सुन सीते तेरे अँसुवन।
रुधिर छलकाते भीग रहे, तेरे मृगनयनी से नयन। # 6
कौन देगा आज सीते तुझे, निर्भयत्व रखने का वचन।
राम और रावन दोनों ने ही ,बलि माँगी तेरा तन -मन। # 7
सक्षम बन,मन के संत्रास को कर,विजयदशमी पर दहन।
प्रज्ज्वलित कर सामर्थ्य का तेज, हो हीनता का समापन। # 8
अब स्वयं ही तू मध्यस्थ बन, करदे हर मति का शोधन।
दाहक बन कर फूँक दे तू , हर अज्ञानी रावन का अहम्। # 9
ज्वाला सी प्रचंड वेग बन, कर नरपशुओं का उच्छ्वसन।
जयजयकार गूंज उठे तेरी,प्रदीप्त आभा से चमके गगन। # 10

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259 thoughts on “#Pratiyogita Kavita by Jaya Singh

  • September 2, 2017 at 9:12 am
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    Kalyugi Ravan ka khubsoorat chitran

  • September 2, 2017 at 9:24 am
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    Aj ki sita ki duvidha

  • September 2, 2017 at 9:25 am
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    Aajkal hamare samaj mai jo kuch ho raha hai,ye kavita uska bahut he achcha chitran karti hai

  • September 2, 2017 at 9:30 am
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    Very apt picture of current society and what a solution to it. Nice going
    God speed.

  • September 2, 2017 at 9:32 am
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    Very nice
    Aaj ka yug me raone jada dikhte hai ram kam

  • September 2, 2017 at 9:43 am
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    Current thought

  • September 2, 2017 at 9:49 am
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    Awsm creation…

  • September 2, 2017 at 10:07 am
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    Nice lines mam……

  • September 2, 2017 at 10:42 am
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    बहुत सुन्दर प्रस्तुति।

  • September 2, 2017 at 11:14 am
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    Awesome thought

  • September 2, 2017 at 11:59 am
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    Very nicely expressed…. Aunty!!

  • September 2, 2017 at 12:17 pm
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    Amazing poem. Very well written

  • September 2, 2017 at 12:19 pm
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    Wonderful expression

  • September 2, 2017 at 12:24 pm
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    Impressive.. So nice

  • September 2, 2017 at 12:26 pm
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    Atisundar kavita, puratan avam naveenta ka sangam, gagar me sagar Bhar diya hai lekhika ne.

  • September 2, 2017 at 12:29 pm
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    Read a great hindi poem after such a long time. Nicely expressed Ma’am

  • September 2, 2017 at 12:45 pm
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    Aaj k aawesh ka ati sahi chitran !!…Jaya ji
    …pahlae bhi mahila ki sthiti yahi thi aur aaj bhi yahi h …!!!!!
    Kab tak aaise hi rahega ……..!!!!!

  • September 2, 2017 at 1:29 pm
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    A truly praiseworthy and stimulant piece of art. Wonderfully written.
    Thanks for sharing 🙂

  • September 2, 2017 at 1:34 pm
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    Good poem…………………………..

  • September 2, 2017 at 1:46 pm
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    Amazing lines.

  • September 2, 2017 at 3:36 pm
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    Very nice thought, good creation …Keep it on.

  • September 2, 2017 at 4:14 pm
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    Nice poem, expressed the feeling of women.

  • September 2, 2017 at 4:14 pm
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    Good lines depicting present situation of women in the society.

  • September 2, 2017 at 4:28 pm
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    An interesting outlook and a flowing rhythm captured in 20 lines. Well worth the read.

  • September 2, 2017 at 5:53 pm
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    Bhut pyari kavita hai

  • September 2, 2017 at 5:57 pm
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    This is spot on for the situation prevailing today

  • September 2, 2017 at 5:58 pm
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    अति सुंदर, भावपूर्ण कविता।

  • September 2, 2017 at 5:59 pm
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    आज के समय को दही ढंग से दर्शा रहा है

  • September 2, 2017 at 6:02 pm
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    For those wishing to understand what is happening today this poetry is bang on

  • September 2, 2017 at 8:13 pm
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    Wonderful piece of work with such a good note.

  • September 3, 2017 at 12:36 am
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    Nice poem…………

  • September 3, 2017 at 5:19 am
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    A beautifully written poem that every girl should read to discover her potential to fight with the most deep rooted evil of the society.

  • September 3, 2017 at 5:34 am
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    Swalambi well written

  • September 3, 2017 at 6:13 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर कविता है

  • September 3, 2017 at 6:15 am
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    Wonderful creation

  • September 3, 2017 at 6:32 am
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    आज के समय की सत्यता को दर्शाने वाली प्रस्तुति है।

  • September 3, 2017 at 6:57 am
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    Nice poem….jaya ji… that’s very beautiful
    Keep it up…

  • September 3, 2017 at 9:25 am
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    Wah. Bahut pyaara Kavita

  • September 4, 2017 at 12:27 am
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    Wow ……Nice

  • September 4, 2017 at 12:38 am
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    बहुत प्रासंगिक एवं मार्मिक

  • September 4, 2017 at 1:03 am
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    Good poem to explain current situation in this society keep it up

  • September 4, 2017 at 2:13 am
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    Bahut sunder.keep it up
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  • September 4, 2017 at 7:12 am
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    Ati uttam , bahut sunder panktiya, gagar main sagar darsati hai panktiya

  • September 4, 2017 at 9:04 am
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    Beautiful express the women’s “man ki pida”.

  • September 4, 2017 at 9:07 am
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    Bahut hi sundar kavita

  • September 4, 2017 at 4:31 pm
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    Wat a lovely poem ❤️

  • September 4, 2017 at 4:33 pm
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    Ati uttam awesome…….

  • September 4, 2017 at 4:36 pm
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    Bhut sundar kavita

  • September 4, 2017 at 4:56 pm
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    True ……Nice poem…

  • September 4, 2017 at 5:02 pm
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    It’s a beautifully written poem ♥️

  • September 4, 2017 at 5:35 pm
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    Bahut sunder vayakhya
    Dil ko chu jane wale

  • September 5, 2017 at 11:42 am
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    amazingly presented thoughts

  • September 6, 2017 at 4:25 am
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    Bahut hi sundar kavita
    Badhai

  • September 6, 2017 at 10:14 am
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    Very nice.good.shaaandaar.best.

  • September 6, 2017 at 10:50 am
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    Bahut hi sunder Kavita, Vartman Nari ka sahi chitran

  • September 6, 2017 at 11:22 am
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    बहुत सुदंर कविता। 🙂

  • September 6, 2017 at 11:32 am
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    Bbeautiful expression of thoughts

  • September 6, 2017 at 11:43 am
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    Nice expression about the real truth of a woman..

  • September 6, 2017 at 5:22 pm
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    Nice expression..

  • September 7, 2017 at 8:21 am
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    Very nice…..keep it up

  • September 7, 2017 at 9:26 am
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    Its very beautiful poem now a day for the women’s soreness

  • September 7, 2017 at 10:42 am
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    Bahut sunder krati. Hindi bhasha ka bahut hi acha oopyog.

  • September 7, 2017 at 10:44 am
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    Wo—kya kavita hai. Bahut bahut Badhai.

  • September 7, 2017 at 11:49 am
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    Atti Sundar krati.

  • September 7, 2017 at 11:57 am
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    अच्छी प्रस्तुति , बधाई की पात्र है लेखिका ।

  • September 7, 2017 at 12:00 pm
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    Atti Sundar kavita

  • September 7, 2017 at 12:00 pm
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    सुंदर चरित्र चित्रण आज की नारी के संदर्भ का ।

  • September 7, 2017 at 5:42 pm
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    Bahut hi sunder

  • September 8, 2017 at 5:14 am
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    Bahut hi sundet kavita likhi hai aapne

  • September 8, 2017 at 5:16 am
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    Bhabhi ji bahut hi sunder kavita likhi hai aapne

  • September 8, 2017 at 9:58 am
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    Hindi me likhi gaye sabse sunder kavita

  • September 8, 2017 at 9:59 am
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    Beautiful Poem I never read so far

  • September 8, 2017 at 10:25 am
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    Bahut sunder kavita

  • September 8, 2017 at 11:16 am
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    Nice poem, stri ki peeda ki sunder abhivyakti

  • September 8, 2017 at 11:23 am
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    Nice poem, stri ki peeda ki sunder abhivyakti

  • September 8, 2017 at 11:42 am
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    Very nice , good poem keep it on.

  • September 8, 2017 at 12:11 pm
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    Good, congratulations to lekhika.

  • September 9, 2017 at 2:44 am
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    Nicely expressed the view of current situation.congratulation

  • September 9, 2017 at 2:46 am
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    Nicely expressed the view of current situation.congratulation

  • September 9, 2017 at 2:49 am
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    Nicely expressed the view of current situation congratulations to lekhika

  • September 9, 2017 at 2:57 am
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    Sunder prastuti lekhika ko badhai

  • September 9, 2017 at 3:49 am
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    Very Nice Poem In Hindi

  • September 9, 2017 at 1:02 pm
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    Excellent Poem on current topic

  • September 9, 2017 at 1:04 pm
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    Atti sunder kavita ke dwara kalyugi samasya ka chitran

  • September 9, 2017 at 1:05 pm
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    Impressive thoughts nicely expressed congratulation to jaya ji

  • September 9, 2017 at 1:06 pm
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    Beautiful poem by Jaya Singh Mam

  • September 9, 2017 at 2:34 pm
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    Lovely poemimpressive

  • September 9, 2017 at 3:28 pm
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    very impressive explanation of women feelings

  • September 9, 2017 at 3:35 pm
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    very nice, beautifully written

  • September 9, 2017 at 6:11 pm
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    excellent poem and impressive thoughts

  • September 10, 2017 at 5:01 am
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    Wonderful thought on current social evil

  • September 10, 2017 at 5:03 am
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    Nice poem what,s a beauty in this

  • September 10, 2017 at 5:55 am
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    Very beautiful poem

  • September 10, 2017 at 6:26 am
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    Kya baat hai. Bahut hi sunder

  • September 10, 2017 at 8:40 am
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    Beautiful, bahut hi sunder kavita hai

  • September 10, 2017 at 9:29 am
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    Good poem jaya ji expression and thoughts are excellent

  • September 10, 2017 at 9:42 am
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    Good poem jaya ji expression and thoughts are excellent

  • September 10, 2017 at 9:46 am
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    Sunder prastuti jaya ji congratulations

  • September 10, 2017 at 11:49 am
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    Excellent poem on current topic

  • September 10, 2017 at 12:58 pm
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    Kavita ke dwara vartmab nari ke dasha ka sahi chitran

  • September 10, 2017 at 1:01 pm
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    sunder kavita Ka sundet chitran

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:41 am
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    What a beautiful kavita

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:44 am
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    Beautiful Poem. Keep it up.

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:46 am
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    Bhabhi ji bahut hi sundar kavita likhi hai aap ne. Badhai

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:52 am
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    wonderful, hindi ki sabse khubsoorat krati

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:54 am
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    Atti sundar kavita Mam

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:55 am
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    Mam bahut sunder kavita likhi hai aap ne

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:56 am
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    Beautiful Poem jaya. Bahut Bahut Badhai

  • September 12, 2017 at 9:58 am
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    Bahut hi sunder chitran. Please send it to a good newspaper or book.

  • September 12, 2017 at 10:01 am
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    bahut sunder kavita likhi hai aap ne Bhabhi ji.

  • September 12, 2017 at 10:02 am
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    Good, excellent poem mam

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:42 am
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    wonderful poem on current social evil.

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:43 am
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    Mausi bahut hi sunder kavita hai

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:44 am
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    Madam, kayugi ravan roopi samaj ki booraye ka sunder chitran

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:46 am
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    Samaj ki boorai per kya kavita likhi hai. Vastava me aap bafhai ki patra hai

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:47 am
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    Madam bahut sunder likha hai aap ne

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:49 am
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    Beautiful poem. Hindi ke sabse best kavita

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:50 am
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    Hindi ki bahut hi sunder kavita

  • September 12, 2017 at 11:53 am
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    Atti sunder kavita. Hindi bhasha ka sunder chitran

  • September 13, 2017 at 7:20 am
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    mam bahut hi sunder kavita hai aap ki

  • September 13, 2017 at 7:28 am
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    Mam Bahut hi sunder kavita hai

  • September 13, 2017 at 7:29 am
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    What a beautiful expression on current evil of our society

  • September 13, 2017 at 7:30 am
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    Hindi me likhi gaye sabse behtarin kavita

  • September 13, 2017 at 7:31 am
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    Bhabhi ji bahut hi sunderr kavita hai aap ki

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:09 am
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    Wonderful poem written by Jaya Singh

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:14 am
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    Beautiful poem as I read so far

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:15 am
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    Kya sunder kavita hai

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:16 am
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    Sunder poem no word to appreciate

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:37 am
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    Bahut sunder kavita hai Bhabhi ji

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:39 am
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    Very nice poem I red so far

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:49 am
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    Beautiful poem truely said on current event

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:51 am
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    Atti sunder kavita hai

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:53 am
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    Excellent poem red by me

  • September 13, 2017 at 9:55 am
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    Thanks for your valuable comment

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:27 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर कविता है

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:29 am
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    Beautiful poem. Badhai ho.

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:30 am
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    Atti sunder kavita Jaya ji

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:30 am
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    Excellent poem jaya ji , appropriate on the current tragic condition of women

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:31 am
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    Wonderful, What a beautiful poem

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:33 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर कविता है

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:34 am
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    Bahut hi khoob surat kavita hai

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:35 am
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    Khoob Surat kavita . Congratulation for this

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:37 am
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    Marvolous poem with a beautiful words used in it.

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:38 am
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    Bahut sunder krati. Badhai

  • September 14, 2017 at 7:39 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर कविता है

  • September 14, 2017 at 8:45 am
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    very nice thought , good keep it up with more positivity

  • September 14, 2017 at 8:53 am
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    Atti sunder kavita

  • September 14, 2017 at 8:54 am
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    Wonderful poem bhabhi ji Congrat.

  • September 14, 2017 at 8:56 am
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    kya baat hai, sunder atti sunder kavita

  • September 14, 2017 at 8:56 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर कविता है

  • September 14, 2017 at 8:58 am
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    Bahut pyari kavita hai mam

  • September 14, 2017 at 8:59 am
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    Beautiful poem, congratulation

  • September 14, 2017 at 9:00 am
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    Very nice poem Madam

  • September 14, 2017 at 9:02 am
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    Wonderful poem written by you madam

  • September 14, 2017 at 9:03 am
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    Atti sunder kavita hai. You deserve for best

  • September 14, 2017 at 2:08 pm
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    Sunder kriti,lekhika ko badhai rachna ke liye

  • September 14, 2017 at 2:32 pm
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    Beautiful poem . excellent presentation of thoughts in Hindi language

  • September 14, 2017 at 2:34 pm
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    congratulation to kaviyarti for her beautiful creation .

  • September 14, 2017 at 3:19 pm
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    Beautiful poem congratulation for you efforts

  • September 14, 2017 at 3:20 pm
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    Wonderful, what a nice poem

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:40 am
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    Awesome creation…

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:42 am
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    अति सुंदर, कविता।

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:43 am
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    Bahut hi sunder shabdo me chitran

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:44 am
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    Vary nice. Your expression are wonderful

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:45 am
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    Atti sunder kavita. Keep it up

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:47 am
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    Hindi ka bahut hi acha oopyug. Congratulation Jaya ji

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:49 am
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    Brilliant, what a beautiful poem you must deserve for best.

  • September 15, 2017 at 6:50 am
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    Kavita ke roop me acha chitran. Badhai ho.

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:01 am
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    Impressive, can’t explain the beauty of poem

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:02 am
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    Atti sunder kavita. Samaj ki boorai ka sahi chitran

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:04 am
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    Samaj ki boorai par likhi ab tak ki best kacita.

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:10 am
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    Bhabhi ji aap ne bahut hi sunder kavita likhi hai. Iss ke liye aap ko badai

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:13 am
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    Beautiful poem deserve for each compliment

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:15 am
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    Bahut dino baad ek sunder kavita padne ko mili. Badai.

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:18 am
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    Bahut hi pyari kavita hai

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:19 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर कविता

  • September 15, 2017 at 7:23 am
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    excellent poem in hindi on occassion of Hindi Pakhwada. Congratulation.

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:01 am
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    Nice Kavita. Pad kar bahut accha laga

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:03 am
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    Bahut badiya kavita.

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:04 am
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    Excellent poem I had red so far.

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:05 am
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    Wonderful poem. Congratulation.

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:07 am
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    Very Nice. What I red is amazing

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:08 am
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    Atti sunder kavita

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:09 am
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    Aaj ke samajik parivesh per acha chitran

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:16 am
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    बहुत सुंदर। Badhai ho

  • September 16, 2017 at 7:18 am
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    Sunder kavita. Samaj ka sahi margdarshan

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:02 am
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    Beautiful thought in poem form. Congrat

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:03 am
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    बहुत सुंदर कविता

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:04 am
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    Beautiful poem, congratulation for your nice thought

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:06 am
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    Excellent expression of societies view in good form

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:07 am
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    Bahut hi sunder kavita hai Bhabhiji

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:08 am
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    wonderful thought in poem form

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:09 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर कविता

  • September 16, 2017 at 10:10 am
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    Kamal ki kavita hai

  • September 16, 2017 at 2:35 pm
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    A powerful expression looking to the current conditions

  • September 18, 2017 at 8:01 am
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    Very nice poem. Excellent presentation of thoughts.congratulations to lekhika.

  • September 18, 2017 at 8:05 am
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    Excellent poem ,good presentation.

  • September 18, 2017 at 8:57 am
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    Atti sunder kavita

  • September 18, 2017 at 8:58 am
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    Brilliant thought of social evil

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:00 am
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    Hindi ke sabdo ka acha sadopyog sunder krati ke liye

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:01 am
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    Hamesh hi aap new topic per bahut acha likhti hai. Badhai

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:02 am
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    Wonderful poem Jaya ji

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:03 am
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    Sunder Kavita ke liye bahut bahut badhai

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:03 am
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    Beautiful thoughts of current situation. Very nice.

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:04 am
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    very nice poem Jaya ji

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:05 am
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    Badhai ho Bhabhi ji bahut achi kavita likhi hai aap ne.

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:09 am
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    Wonderful poem with good expression

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:13 am
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    Bahut achi rachna hai

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:15 am
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    Achi kavita dwara Mahilao ke shoshan ka sahi chitran

  • September 18, 2017 at 9:16 am
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    Samaj ki burai ka kavita dwara sahi expose

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:08 am
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    Bahut hi sunder kavita

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:09 am
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    very nice poem Madam

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:11 am
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    Beautiful kavita deserve for best.

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:12 am
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    wonderful poem in hindi

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:18 am
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    Excellent poem and good expression

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:19 am
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    Bahut hi achi kavita hai

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:21 am
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    Nice thought in the form of kavita

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:22 am
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    Nari ke shoshan ka kavita ke roop me acha chitran

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:25 am
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    Wonderful poem on current thought

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:28 am
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    bahut badiya kavita

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:28 am
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    Very nice poem Anuty

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:29 am
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    बहुत सुंदर। Badhai ho

  • September 18, 2017 at 10:30 am
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    Beautiful poem deserve for each reward and award

  • September 18, 2017 at 12:39 pm
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    Nice poem , impressed with expression of thoughts

  • September 18, 2017 at 3:11 pm
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    Excellent poem congratulations to jayaji

  • September 18, 2017 at 3:16 pm
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    Good poem keep it up for more creativity.

  • September 19, 2017 at 10:24 am
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    जयाजी को एक अच्छी कविता के लिए बधाई

  • September 19, 2017 at 10:28 am
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    Acchi kavita ke madhyam se stri ki peeda ka shi charitra chitran

  • September 19, 2017 at 10:31 am
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    Nicely crafted thoughtful poem.GOOD

  • September 19, 2017 at 10:34 am
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    Very nice poem keep it on jaya ji congratulations

  • September 19, 2017 at 10:42 am
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    बहुत ही सुंदर प्रस्तुति बधाई जयाजी

  • September 19, 2017 at 10:44 am
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    Good poem and presentation of thoughts are excellent

  • September 25, 2017 at 5:21 am
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    Nice efforts good poem congratulations to jaya ji

  • September 25, 2017 at 5:24 am
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    Excellent poem well described and executed…

  • September 25, 2017 at 5:28 am
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    बहुत ही अच्छी कविता शब्दों का सुंदर चयन बधाई

  • September 25, 2017 at 5:31 am
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    Good poem jaya ji Stri Ram aur Ravan ke madhyam se aaj ki sthiti ka chitran

  • September 25, 2017 at 12:21 pm
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    बहुत सुंदर कविता , शब्दों का उत्तम प्रयोग ।

  • September 25, 2017 at 12:25 pm
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    Pyari rachna kaviyatri ne sunder tarike se bhavnaon ki abhivyakti ki hai

  • September 25, 2017 at 4:05 pm
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    Excellent creation congratulations

  • September 25, 2017 at 4:09 pm
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    Khoobsurat kriti prasangik aur sapekshik

  • September 26, 2017 at 1:02 pm
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    Nice poem sunder prastuti stri ke dukh ka sahi chitran…

  • September 26, 2017 at 1:06 pm
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    excellence in composition Of thoughts

  • September 26, 2017 at 5:24 pm
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    Well executed nice description

  • September 27, 2017 at 1:56 am
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    Excellent creativity from poetess

  • September 27, 2017 at 2:00 am
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    Nice poetry well executed good

  • September 27, 2017 at 2:04 am
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    Bahut hi sunder kavita hai lekhika ko badhai

  • September 28, 2017 at 9:52 am
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    Beautiful poem reflecting the truth

  • September 28, 2017 at 9:57 am
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    Excellent poetry very good

  • September 28, 2017 at 12:55 pm
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    Expression of thoughts and word vocabulary is very good in the poetry

  • September 28, 2017 at 12:58 pm
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    Acchi prastuti lekhika ne uttam shabdon ke prayog se sthiti ka suder varnan kiya hai

  • September 28, 2017 at 1:03 pm
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    Congratulations to poetess for nice creation

  • October 5, 2017 at 4:22 pm
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    Nice poem congratulations

  • October 10, 2017 at 6:20 am
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    आद्वितीय प्रस्तुतिअच्छी कविता

  • October 12, 2017 at 7:14 am
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    Nice thought and creativity from words

  • October 12, 2017 at 7:17 am
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    Congratulations to poetess for great Poem

  • October 12, 2017 at 7:27 am
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    Best thought about the worst situation of a female in society.

  • October 12, 2017 at 7:48 am
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    Beautiful creativity .. Excellent poem

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